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For Want of a Comma.
May. 6th, 2013 08:50 pmI have also been known to do a spot of editing now and then. While I'm not as happy with the ending as I could be, the rest of it amuses me and even made my spouse smile.
For Want of a Comma
Scene: a throne room. Prince John paces. You may imagine him played by a scruffy lion with a short mane if you wish.
PJ: I have sent my man, Rich Lackcomma, to spy upon Robin Hood. He reports today!
ENTER Lackcomma. You may imagine him as played by a cross-eyed crocodile.
( PJ: You have returned with information? )
For Want of a Comma
Scene: a throne room. Prince John paces. You may imagine him played by a scruffy lion with a short mane if you wish.
PJ: I have sent my man, Rich Lackcomma, to spy upon Robin Hood. He reports today!
ENTER Lackcomma. You may imagine him as played by a cross-eyed crocodile.
( PJ: You have returned with information? )